Please Read Dedicated typo and translation error thread

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shirotsuki

Farmhand
- Language: Simplified Chinese（简体中文）
- Platform: PC
- Version: 1.5.6 (latest version on Steam)

Gus' Dialog during Spirit's Eve
English: It's a lot of fun to cook with pumpkin. Such an interesting fruit.
Current: 南瓜可以搭配出很多种煮法。真是一种有趣的蔬菜。
Better: 南瓜可以搭配出很多种煮法。真是一种有趣的果实。（to match with the word "fruit"）

Elliott's Two Hearts Event
1.when Elliott is asking what kind of novels the player likes, there are 3 options: "Mystery", "Romance", "Sci-Fi". The option "Mystery" should be translated as "悬疑" instead of current "悬念"

2.Elliott's response to "mystery"
English: Mystery, huh? It's definitely an exciting genre. I'll remember that.
Current: 很神奇吧？这种类型的确是很让人兴奋呢。真是终身难忘啊。
Correct: 悬疑，是吗？这种类型的确很让人兴奋。我会记住的。

3.Elliott's response to "romance"
English:Ah, one of the classic genres. I'll remember that.
Current:啊，传统风格啊。真是终身难忘呢。
Correct:噢，经典的类型。我会记住的。

4.Elliott's response to "sci-fi"
English: I would've never guessed! I suppose even those of the 'earthiest' profession sometimes have their heads in the stars. I'll remember that.
Current:真是想不到啊！就算是是那些“粗俗的”职业也有出人头地的一天。我会铭记在心的。(The translations are so terrible that it even distorted Elliott's character)
Correct:真是猜不到啊！我想，就算是那些“脚踏实地”的人们也有仰望星空的时候。我会铭记在心的。

Elliott's Eight Hearts Event
English:it's like an elephant's been lifted off my shoulders.
Current:就像便秘了整个月突然畅通无阻的感觉。(the translation is too vulgar!!)
Correct:就像是从肩膀上卸下了一只大象的感觉。
 
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margotbean

margotbean

Sodbuster
Windows (Steam)
v1.5.6 Hotfix #3
Hungarian

"Red Plate" is translated as "Red table" (Vörös tábla)
The translations for fruit tree saplings are inconsistent. All except banana & mango are translated as "[fruit] tree sapling", but banana & mango are just "[fruit] sapling"

Cherry Sapling --> Cseresznyefa csemete
Apricot Sapling --> Sárgabarackfa csemete
Orange Sapling --> Narancsfa csemete
Peach Sapling --> Őszibarackfa csemete
Pomegranate Sapling --> Gránátalmafa csemete
Apple Sapling --> Almafa csemete

but
Mango Sapling --> Mangó csemete
Banana Sapling --> Banán csemete

Thank you!
 

shirotsuki

Farmhand
- Language: Simplified Chinese（简体中文）
- Platform: PC
- Version: 1.5.6 (latest version on Steam)

Penny's dialog when she meets Pam at movie theater
1. English: Watching a movie with mom sure brings me back!
Current: 和妈妈一起看电影肯定能让我恢复！(outrageously wrong)
Correct: 和妈妈一起看电影真是勾起了我的回忆！

2. English: Pam and Penny are watching intently!
Current: 帕姆和佩妮正全神贯注地看着！
Correct: 潘姆和潘妮正在全神贯注地看电影！

3. English: It's great to be able to do things as a family again!
Current: 能再次一家人一起做事真是太好了！
Better: 能够再次一家人一起行动真是太好了
 

shirotsuki

Farmhand
- Language: Simplified Chinese（简体中文）
- Platform: PC
- Version: 1.5.6 (latest version on Steam)

The category: Animal Product（动物制品）
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I suggest renaming this category as “动物产品”. Because the word “制品” indicates that these products are made of/from animals, which is not true and too brutal for the main idea of this game. “产品” simply means they are produced by animals.
 

ericssongiannangeli@gmail

Newcomer
- Platform: PC
- Language: Spanish
- Version: 1.5.6 Hotfix #3

There is a misspelling in the scarecrow letter when you get all the 8 rare scarecrows in Spanish.
It shows "aecpte" instead of "acepte". Not a big mistake but I thought it should be fixed.

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shirotsuki

Farmhand
- Language: Simplified Chinese（简体中文）
- Platform: PC
- Version: 1.5.6 (latest version on Steam)

Stable's description
English: Allows you to keep and ride a horse. Horse included.
Current: 让你饲养马匹。包括马匹。
Correct: 让你饲养马匹。附赠一匹马。

"MovieInvite_InvitedBySomeoneElse"
English: Sorry, I've already got plans to see a movie today, but maybe you can join us there?
Current: 抱歉，我今天已经计划要好演电影了，不过你也可以跟我们一起去，如何？
Correct: 抱歉，我今天已经和别人约好去看电影了，不过你也可以跟我们一起去，如何？

Dark Shrine of Night Terrors' Question
English: Make an offering of one Strange Bun?
Current: 是否确定献祭一个奇怪小包子？
Correct: 是否确定献祭一个奇怪的小面包？
 
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