fischerjd
Greenhorn
I wanted to suggest a small immersion detail about Leo after he moves to town.
Once he’s living in the valley and spending time with Vincent and Jas, it feels a little odd that there’s no mention of him ever visiting Harvey’s clinic. Since he grew up on Ginger Island srrounded by wild parrots and with no formal healthcare, you’d realistically expect at least a check-up or vaccinations after joining the community — especially considering real-world bird-related illnesses like psittacosis (parrot fever), avian influenza, or salmonella that can come from close contact with parrots.
He also eats raw fish, and probably has parasites
He could get the other kids really sick!
Once he’s living in the valley and spending time with Vincent and Jas, it feels a little odd that there’s no mention of him ever visiting Harvey’s clinic. Since he grew up on Ginger Island srrounded by wild parrots and with no formal healthcare, you’d realistically expect at least a check-up or vaccinations after joining the community — especially considering real-world bird-related illnesses like psittacosis (parrot fever), avian influenza, or salmonella that can come from close contact with parrots.
He also eats raw fish, and probably has parasites
He could get the other kids really sick!