Writing Back to the future: SDV verion

[lilan castel]

part 1: When I heard Demitrius will build something really cool and I will test it I was full of happiness! He asked from me to come to the bus stop at 1:00 a.m. I found a homeless cat and I decided to take care of him but I needed to bring him to the experiment. Demitrius brought two clocks. they both working. he puted one on the cat and gave the second to me and he said: "maru. Check this out!" he brought a car and puted the cat inside. he activated something and sent the car. it disappeared. it appeard again after two minutes. now there is a difference between the time in the clocks. thhe one who was on the cat was late. Dad built time machine! we decide to test it! In the next day we go 13 winter 1985. the day he started to build this thing. I invite Penny because I want her to be in a vocation for some time and what is better than this? We must keep it a secret. We travel to there...

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[Lew Zealand]

If you hear Demitrius say anything about a shoddy bomb casing full of used pinball machine parts, you had better grab Penny and run for the hills!

 

[lilan castel]

Part 2: Because the car isn't fly we need to drive until the city. to calico will not be enough. nither of us want to see Pelican on 1985. We will need to drive to zuzu. Penny is unconscious so she will think everything will happen is a dream. Demitrius gave me some 80's themed clothes so I wear them. I can't wear my overalls because they are unfashihonable in this time. He tells me that he and Robin met when she accidentlly crashed her car on me. she took me to her house and them we befriended. I understand but we need to go! Journey of Paire king went out this yoear so I want to see someone tries to beat it! Penny is happy! she so curious to learn about this time! I see a car that will crash this man who cross the street! I need to save him! I jump and moves him out of the way but I got hurt myself.

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[Quillmagic]

I've been following your series of journals, and I really like them! Demetrius would totally find some way to make a time machine out of practically nothing. And I can't wait to see how the Prairie King investigation goes!

 

[lilan castel]

part 3: I wake up in a house. I feel a warm hand on my cheek. I hear a voice. they say: you are safe here. I recognize the voice! Robin! Oh no! I accidently corrupted the timeline! Dad will not meet mom! I need to bring together my parents! the best secenario is the Cafe but where is the younger self of my dad? I look at a photo of me and seb and I start to dissappear! I will need to hurry! I ask Demitrius where he lived in this year, he say he don't remember. Damm it! I have some money so I call to 144 (Information) and ask for his number. they say don't have this number so I ask for address. he lives in Pine Bolevard 123! But there is a problem. I know he will be in the Cafe in a few hours so I bring Robin into there. I ask her if she want to see someone tries to beat that new arcade game. she agrees and we go!
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[lilan castel]

Part 4: I'm in the Cafe. Someone tries to beat the game. Seb told me that Abigail beaten this game. They fail to beat it and lost all of their lives in the 4th level. The younger self of dad coming! They ignore Robin! I need a plan. They learn together in school but it is winter. Forget the prom. The only chance is mix the notes for the feast of winter star. But there is a party they will engage together tomorrow! I will need to do it there.
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[lilan castel]

Part 5: I am in the party. I offer younger dad and Robin to dance together. I'm kinda bad at dancing but I try. we dance together for a half of a hour and then Robin and Demitrius ask me to leave. I see they dance together! I fixed the timeline! I leave the party and dad comes to the entrance. I need to help Sebastian's children to not get into trouble in the future. I enter the car and we drive to 2045. we are on the sidewalk because every car is flying! we stop in an alley. dad gives me money to buy clothes because he don't know about the fashion here. First of all I need to go to the clothes and shoes shop. I buy a purple t-shirt and a pair of blue pants and also a pink jacket. I have enough money to buy a pair of sneakers. I look like many other people but I unique. Dad said that they will be in the cafe: "Cafe 2015". how intersting! I order a cup of orange juice and personal strawberry pie. I see the children! they look sad. Someone else try to convince them to steal something from the museon but I stop them. that person challenge me to a race but I need to agree. they have a hoverboard and I don't so the race is unfair! I will lose but I see a child with a board. I take and promise to return later. now this is fair! we are in tie! I am on water, I can't move! I need help! I decide to swim and I lure the person to the old courtyard there and they destroys it! now his children will not get into trouble! I return to the Cafe and dad wait for me there. he shows me the newspaper and istead of the children the person enters to trouble! there is one problem. two Police women found Penny and they took her with them. we need to get her back!
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[lilan castel]

part 6: Where is Penny? Wait! I see her in a flying police car! I follow the car. It is too fast so I use the hoverboard. I find a rope and use it to attach myself to the car. This is scary but I love it! I hear someone running after me. I must be imagined. They put Penny in a house and go. I can't use the door so I walk around the house. There are many garden plants so I walk slowly and find a window but not Penny. I hear someone say to her she have nice shirt. Then I see her. I pul her and we're out! We go to the time machine. Dad notice something! Someone used the machine! I take a look in my picture. Dad is dissappearing! I need to hurry! again. I go back to 2015.
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[lilan castel]

part 7: I'm in 2015. I'm not sure where I am now. everything is ruined. I run away and I see a huge building! There is a neon sign. it reads: "Robert Parix the no.1 citizen of Fengirl republic!" I heard this name! He was the buly in mom's highschool! He used the time machine! I go into the building. Now there is a casino and a hotel instead of the courtyard! We have a problem! I need to meet him but I go out. I hear someone calling for help! I go and help her. her leg is broken so I use a plank and put it in place. she thanks me. I look at the place why? why? I go in. I see many people drinking. I heard that there is an alcholist in the saloon. I think everyone here and this man are the same. I use the elevator and go to the highest floor. He isn't here. I go back to the ground floor and ask where he is. I didn't opened a meeting with him so I will need to capure him.
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[lilan castel]

part 8: Antony are you there? (Antony is the farmer in this story. not Lilan). I need your help! He isn't here so I go on. I realize Prix is the poerson who followed me! just in time! his room is unloked so I enter. I will talk with him no matter what. he notices me and he calls to secuirty. they kick me out. What to do? I see something in the museon. he went rich in 13 winter 1985! the exact day when I visited the past! the older person bought an almanch and gave it to his younger self! I saw an almanach in the cafe so he bought it! I call dad and tell him what I found. my plan is find the book and take it and then burn it! I go to there!
well I'm there. I see him in the party. I try to take it but he notices me. I see an adult take the book. I try again and I fail. I decide to follow the adult and I take the book! Wait! this isn't the book! this is a magazine in the same cover! I go back and the pary is over so I go after Prix and he puted the almanach on his car I take it but he try to catch me! My legs against a car is an unfair race and the hoverboard isn't with me. I run with all my might but I'm gonna be dead! then dad help me and I climb up to the delorian with the book. Prix colides with a garbage truck! I burn the almanach and Then a lightning strikes the car. I stuck here. I need to find younger dad! then I get a letter. dad is in the paire era and he works as a builder.
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[lilan castel]

part 9: I sneak to younger dad's house and get the plans to the time machine. I find the blueprints but younger dad catches me. He say that only a time traveler can get those blueprints so he knows I'm a time traveler! At least he don't know I'm his daugter! I tell him I need the blueprints and I'll keep them as a secret. We build the time machine and we test it in an abanoded parking lot. I drive and I find myself in the parie era! But there is a horde of people next to me! I try my best and flee. I park the car in a cave but I accidently opened a hole in the fuel tank! I look like a gold miner so I walk to the north. then I fall.
I wake up in a bed. Someone checkes if I awake. She gives me a cup of water but I don't drink them. They aren't edible. I ask her where am I and she tell me I'm in Zuzu city and her name is Anna. She asks me what is my name and From where am I. I need to lie. I tell her my name is Martin and I'm from somewhere far away. She pushes to me the cup of water but I tell her Those water aren't safe for drinking. She tells me this is the only water she have. I get up and help her to clean the water. I need to find dad. I know the city builds a clock this year. he must be there! Anna offeres that I will sleep in her house until I'll get home and I agree. I will go now!
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[lilan castel]

Part 10: Anna takes me to the city. I see many people and horses. It is really dirty and I try my best to not step on you know what. I see the clock! I run to there and I don't see dad! Where he is? I ask some workers and they say that he is still working. he will get back soon. He is back! I call him and he comes! I ask him to come to somewhere else and I tell him what happened. He is really mad at me but he missed me alot! I tell him about Anna and what happend to the time machine. We will need to fix it. I go back to Anna's house and go to the yard and watch the stars. Anna comes too and she tells me her dream is see a man landing on the moon. I tell her this will come true and she say that I'm kidding and this is impossible. Anna tells me to beware from Roberto Prix. I realize that he is Robert Prix's Great grandfather! I will need to be careful.
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[lilan castel]

Part 11: Dad tells me his idea for how to fix the time machine. since there isn't any gas station in the whole world we need to push the time machine fast enough. Horse isn't fast enough so I we need another plan. The train exists so it can be a good idea but how can we get the time machine in front of a train?! We decided to put the time machine tomorrow in the front of 12:00 pm train. But what I will tell to Anna? I can't tell her the truth but I'm not sure what will be the best lie in this case. I need to think about this more. Alright. I decided to tell Anna the truth. I tell Anna I will return to my home tommorow by the train which is right. But Anna asking me where is my home. I tell her I live in the south but nothing more. She seems satisfied. I go to sleep and Hope this will work.
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[lilan castel]

Part 13: dad and me are going to the place where I left the time machine. Luckily no one stole it! We push it together to the train station which is 15 kilometers away. It will be hard. After we finally get to there dad shows me something. He built a fuel log so we can push the train fast enough! I enter to the time machine and Dad enters the train. Then we hear something. Footsteps. I see Anna. She wanted to say goodbye but what can I tell her? She is very angry. She discovered I lied to her. Well I had to. Dad tries to calm her down but it doesn't work. I need to tell her the truth. I explain Anna what happened to us but she think again I'm lying! Dad helps me and tell her that people will be on the moon which is something I told her too! She finally calms down but she want to come with us! I tell her she can't but I need her for one last thing. Distract everyone from this train. She agrees.
Anna's POV: After Martin or Maru told me about herself I didn't belive her. I am going to help her but after this I'm going to build a time machine and go live with her. No one will judge me there.
Maru's POV: We are ready! I'm in the time machine and dad starts to push it! I can't see anything so I will stay here. I can feel that the train is very fast and I hope for good. Dad enters the time machine because the trian is fast enough! We activate the time machine and go back to the present. Alright. I'm home now and I see Sebastian. I tell him where I was but he doesn't care.
The end!