Writing What's special about her?! 11+ to read

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Lucky Nova Demos

Lucky Nova Demos

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This story idea got stuck in my head so Imma just write it. Idc if you guys criticize it, it's just my story so shush no one cares

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"Hannah! Hannah!" Hannah turned around and saw Alex waving at her.

"Hi Alex! How are you?"

"Good. I just wanted to ask, where did you get that outfit? It slays on you!"

Today Hannah was wearing all black with a skull on her shirt, some silver earrings and had a black baseball cap on.

"Thanks so much! I actually made it."

"Oooh! Can you make me a shirt like yours? It would be cool to match."

At this point, Hannah had been here in Stardew Valley for a year at least, and Alex' crush just kept growing... Ignoring poor Haley.

"UGH! What's so special about her?!" I accidentally yelled and Emily turned toward me.

“Are you okay? Are you tired? You should go home and get some rest.”

“LEAVE ME ALONE EMILY!”

I stormed off, not knowing why I was even mad at her. She didn't do anything!

I went over to Alex and asked if I could talk to him.

“Uh, sure Haley. Catch you later Hannah!”

Which made me more angry but I took some deep breaths and spoke,

“Alex, I-i uh… uhm… I can't do this!”

Alex called after me as I ran away in tears. I'll try tomorrow I guess!

Tmrw

Deep breaths Haley…

I walked over to Alex's house and knocked. He opened the door looking tired with his hair mussed up. It made me swoon!

“Alex, can we talk somewhere alone? I have something to tell you.”

“Okay. Follow me.”

He led me to a small alcove near the river where we were completely alone.

“Alex I-”

I got cut off as Hannah said,

“Hi Alex! Morning Haley! How are you today!”

I was furious and walked off, leaving them behind. Worse than that, when I looked back, I saw them laughing together! How dare Hannah steal my man!

I know how to get revenge… I JUS
T NEED TO IGNORE HER LIKE ALWAYS! Haha great plan Haley!
 
Cuddlebug

Cuddlebug

Cowpoke
Why not give it a try? But you should make it clearer that it's told from Haley's point of view; that's not entirely clear at first.
I read a nice fanfic on Wattpad where Haley even became violent out of sheer jealousy...
Alex does a complete 180 when you befriend him and becomes a handsome husband, but Haley... Hmm, I can't really warm up to her in any game.
 
Lew Zealand

Lew Zealand

Helper
Cuddlebug said:
Why not give it a try? But you should make it clearer that it's told from Haley's point of view; that's not entirely clear at first.
I read a nice fanfic on Wattpad where Haley even became violent out of sheer jealousy...
Alex does a complete 180 when you befriend him and becomes a handsome husband, but Haley... Hmm, I can't really warm up to her in any game.
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I will admit to marrying not one but 2 different people in different saves based on comments here in the Forums. First was Abigail, who was never on my radar as I didn't run into her much except to get in her way during the Egg Hunt. But at the time this place was like Cult of Abby. So I married her in the next save to see what all the fuss was about and she was pretty entertaining.

But as always there were a lot of people who don't like Haley's initial attitude in the game because her initial attitude is that person we all really super didn't like in school. But she got so much slagging here that in my following save I married her just to be contrary.

And well—

I mean you know...




She's kinda better than Abby and a complete kookbiscuit.

I will now hide in the corner to avoid thrown tomatoes.

 
Cuddlebug

Cuddlebug

Cowpoke
Lew Zealand said:
I will admit to marrying not one but 2 different people in different saves based on comments here in the Forums. First was Abigail, who was never on my radar as I didn't run into her much except to get in her way during the Egg Hunt. But at the time this place was like Cult of Abby. So I married her in the next save to see what all the fuss was about and she was pretty entertaining.

But as always there were a lot of people who don't like Haley's initial attitude in the game because her initial attitude is that person we all really super didn't like in school. But she got so much slagging here that in my following save I married her just to be contrary.

And well—

I mean you know...




She's kinda better than Abby and a complete kookbiscuit.

I will now hide in the corner to avoid thrown tomatoes.

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Oh, yes, you're absolutely right, there are cults for all bachelors/-rettes here, so don't be shy if you want to throw tomatoes. Some will like it, some won't. I only ever make friends with the girls but don't romance them and Haley gives sharp comments every now and then, even with eight hearts, which is at least a change from the others... My only revenge (even If it's sad for her) is, after I marry Alex, she no longer has a chance to become a flower queen 😉
 
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