Writing Stardew Valley Fan Novel Series

Gamer1234556

Greenhorn
This will be the place for my personal fan novel series. I will be posting what I have, mostly rough drafts of certain chapters and incremental progress. I have posted some pdfs and word documents on Discord, but if anyone has any advice to give me regarding the technical side of this novel, please let me know.

I am kind of new to this, so any advice is much appreciated.
 

Gamer1234556

Greenhorn
Book 1 – Spring, Year 1

This first installment follows Eric Keene’s arrival in Pelican Town and the psychological adjustment that comes with rebuilding a life from scratch. Spring focuses on his beginnings as the town’s newest farmer and his evolving relationships with the community.

The Saloon, Mines, and Museum feature prominently, and characters such as Emily, Shane, Penny, and others play central roles in shaping Eric’s early development.

Book 1 is complete (30+ chapters). I’ll be posting one to two chapters per week to allow space for discussion and feedback.

Constructive critique is welcome — especially on pacing, dialogue, characterization, and thematic clarity.

Prologue
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
 
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Gamer1234556

Greenhorn
Prologue
I still remember the last message my grandfather sent me from his deathbed.

“...and for my very special grandson:
I want you to have this sealed envelope.”

I took the letter, sealed with a deep purple stamp.

“No, no, don’t open it yet… Have patience,”
he said, his voice thin but steady.
“Listen close…
There will come a day when you feel crushed by the burden of modern life…
when your bright spirit begins to fade into emptiness.
When that happens, my boy, you’ll be ready for this gift.”

Those were the last words I ever heard from him.
Years passed before I thought about that letter again.

I was working in a cubicle at Joja Corporation — a grey, drab, and utterly lifeless space. The only sound was an endless rain of keyboard clicks, like the static of some dying machine. I barely spoke to anyone. I don’t think anyone even remembered my name.

One of the employees was terminated. I can’t recall why. Another looked like he’d been working so long he was practically turning into a skeleton. The place devoured people and spat out their husks.

No dress code, either. It didn’t matter what you wore — your soul looked the same as everyone else’s. One guy came in wearing a full cowboy outfit once. No one even blinked.

Me? I was miserable. Dragging myself through 9-to-5 on almost no sleep. Staring at screens until I felt the computer was siphoning off whatever spark I had left.

That was the day I opened the drawer and pulled out Grandpa’s letter.
Dear Eric,

If you're reading this, you must be in dire need of a change.
The same thing happened to me once. I'd lost sight of what mattered most—real connections with people and the natural world. So I dropped everything and went to the place I truly belonged.

I’ve enclosed the deed to that place—my pride and joy: Keenes Farm.
It’s located in Stardew Valley, on the southern coast.
It’s the perfect place to start a new life.

This was my most precious gift, and now it’s yours.
I know you’ll honor the family name, my boy.

Good luck.
Love, Grandpa

P.S. If Lewis is still alive, say hi to the old guy for me, will ya?

Sigh… Grandpa, you never changed—that perfect mix of sentimentality and dry humour. I missed him more in that moment than I had in years.

I didn’t last long at Joja after that.
I couldn’t.
The walls were closing in, the monotony suffocating. I felt myself slipping, inch by inch, toward something I wasn’t sure I’d climb back from.

So, I quit.

I walked out without packing my desk, without saying goodbye, without looking back. I stepped into the air outside — cold, smoggy, but free — and breathed like it was the first breath I’d taken in months.

The next day, I bought a bus ticket south.

To Stardew Valley.
To Keenes Farm.
To whatever Grandpa had seen in me that I had lost along the way.

I wanted to make him proud.
 

Gamer1234556

Greenhorn
Chapter 1
The bus ride into the valley felt like breathing again for the first time. After years surrounded by grey walls and blue light from a monitor, the sight of actual blue sky and green hills hit me harder than I expected. Stardew Valley was only half a mile ahead when the bus slowed, dust rising in lazy spirals behind us.

When the doors hissed open, I stepped out onto the roadside and let the warmth of the rural air settle on my skin.
“Hello! You must be Eric!” a cheerful voice called out.

I turned to see an energetic woman with bright orange hair and a welcoming grin.

“Er—sorry, who are you?”

“I’m Robin, the local carpenter,” she said. “Mayor Lewis sent me to fetch you and show you the way to your new home. He’s already there, tidying up for your arrival.”

“Oh! Lewis! He was one of my grandfather’s friends.”
Just saying it made something warm flicker in my chest.
“Alright, lead the way.”

When we reached the farm, my excitement was immediately met with… a forest. And a rock garden. And possibly a cryptid or two hiding in the grass.

The place looked like nature had declared squatters’ rights.

“My grandfather really let this place go,” I muttered. “He moved out decades ago but… wow.”

“Eh? What’s wrong?” Robin glanced at me. “Sure, it’s a bit overgrown, but there’s good soil under all that!”

“Robin, I don’t think soil is the problem here,” I groaned, surveying a boulder roughly the size of a small car.

She laughed lightly. “Ah, with a little dedication, you’ll have it cleared up in no time!”

Yeah. I wondered how far “dedication” was supposed to stretch.

The front door of the cottage creaked open, and a familiar voice called,
“Eric?”

“Lewis!” I hurried forward. “It’s so good to see you. I haven’t seen you in forever.”

He smiled, the wrinkles on his face deepening with recognition.
“Ah, Eric, you’ve grown so much. I still remember when your family visited for the summer celebration. Your grandfather was a good man… though it’s been so long that most folks only remember bits and pieces now.”

“That means a lot,” I said quietly. “Really.”

Lewis gestured to the weathered cottage.
“So, you’re moving into your grandfather’s old place?”

“Yeah. It’s… a bit smaller than I remembered.”

“Heh. You were young the last time you were here. But it’s held up well! A fine piece of rustic real estate.”

Behind him, Robin coughed lightly.
“‘Rustic’ is one word for it. ‘Crusty’ might be closer.”

Lewis spun around, scandalized.
“Oh, don’t listen to her, Eric. She’s just trying to coax you into buying one of her upgrades.”

Robin glared at him, betrayed.

Their bickering felt oddly comforting.
Homey, even.

Lewis dusted off his hands.
“Well, you must be tired after that long trip. Get some rest, and tomorrow I suggest exploring the town and saying hello. People love meeting newcomers—especially ones with a connection to the valley.”

“Yeah. I’ll do that.”

He nodded, satisfied, and started toward the gate. Then he paused suddenly.

“Oh! Almost forgot. If you’ve got anything you want to sell, just toss it into that shipping bin over there. I’ll pick it up each evening.”

I stared at the wooden box.
“…Oh. That’s what that is. I thought it was a recycling bin.”

Lewis chuckled all the way down the path.
I woke early the next morning—6:00 AM, according to the old clock above my bed—and found a small package waiting near the door.

Inside were fifteen parsnip seeds and a note in Lewis’s steady handwriting:

“Here’s a little something to get you started.
—Mayor Lewis.”

A good man, that one. Still looking out for my family all these years later.

I stretched the sleep out of my limbs and turned on the TV. For a moment, I wondered if a place like Pelican Town even got a TV signal. Turns out it did… sort of. Three channels: Weather Report, Fortune Teller, and Livin’ Off The Land.

I started with the last one.

“Welcome to ‘Livin’ Off The Land!’ We’re back with another tip for y’all. Todays for all you greenhorns: chop wood and forage while waiting for your first harvest!”

Foraging sounded fine. Chopping wood? In my overgrown disaster of a yard?

That was going to be a whole workout plan by itself.

Next was the fortune teller.

“The spirits are somewhat annoyed today. Luck will not be on your side.”

Figures. Bad luck on day one. Not ominous at all.

Weather last:

“Clear and sunny all day.”

Great. Sunshine was exactly what I needed.

With the morning ahead of me, I stepped outside to face the… monstrosity that Grandpa had left behind.

“What can I even do to clean this up?” I muttered.

Then it hit me.
Grass. Grass was the easiest part.

“I’ll start with the grass. Might get some seeds out of it, too.”

And surprisingly, it didn’t drain too much energy. Stones and logs slowed me down, but grass? Grass didn’t stand a chance.

By the end of the quick cleanup, I’d gathered around 200 fibers, 11 mixed seeds and a couple stray pieces of wood and stone

And the full realization that my wallet contained a grand total of 500 gold—barely enough to buy lunch, let alone supplies. I’d have to be careful.

Curious about the surroundings, I headed north.

That’s where I met him.

A weathered man, grey beard, thick coat. He looked up as I passed.

“A stranger? Hello. Don’t mind me. I’m just minding my own business.”

I blinked. A homeless man? In a town this small?

Not sure what to say, I nodded awkwardly and moved on. Odd guy.

The mines were next, but a giant boulder blocked the way. A worker was trying to break it down, but he didn’t seem to hear me when I asked what was going on. So, I left it alone for now.

Farther along, I spotted a man standing by the cliff’s edge, surveying the valley with an analytical gaze.

“Greetings!” he said brightly. “I’m Demetrius—local scientist and father.”

“Eric,” I introduced myself. “Just settled into the farm east of here. My grandfather owned it.”

“Thanks for saying hello! I’m studying the local flora and fauna. Have you met my daughter Maru? She’s quite excited to meet you.”

“Oh? She is? I’ll keep an eye out.”

I stopped by Robin’s carpentry shop, hoping to find her daughter, but only found Robin herself.

“Have you met everyone in town yet?” she asked. “That sounds exhausting.”

“Not really. Just two people: the weird homeless guy up north and a guy named Demetrius.”

“Demetrius? Oh, you mean my husband!”

“Oh! …Right. I didn’t realize.”

“Most people don’t,” she laughed. “Don’t worry about it.”

Before I left, she added, “Sebastian’s downstairs if you want to say hello, but he says he’s busy.”

Considering the tone, she said it in, I decided not to bother him.

By the time I checked the time again, the sky was dimming. 6 PM already. Not the best hour to meet townsfolk, but maybe the saloon was still buzzing.

Inside, I found a older blonde woman, a middle-aged man tending the bar, a blue-haired waitress and a grumpy man hunched in the corner with a drink.

The bartender waved me over.
“Come in! Welcome to the Stardrop Saloon! I’m Gus—chef and owner. Can I get you something?”

“Eh, not in the mood for anything.”

A raspy voice called from the side, “Not even a tea?”

“Pam,” Gus sighed, “take it easy. It’s his first day.”

The blue-haired woman lit up the moment she saw me.

“Oooh! I can read it on your face—you’re going to love it here in Pelican Town. If you’re ever looking for something to do in the evening, stop by! I work here.”

I couldn’t help smiling.
“Thanks. I’m Eric.”

“That’s a lovely name.” she said, beaming. “I’m Emily.”

I already liked her energy.

The blonde woman clinked her glass. “Name’s Pam. Nothin’ like a sip o’ the good stuff to warm these old bones…”

“Nice to meet you, Pam. And who’s that guy over there?”

“Oh… that’s Shane. Hey, Shane! Come introduce yourself!”

A growl from the corner.

Gus added, “Come on, Shane. Be polite.”

Shane stood, reluctantly. He didn’t look pleased about it.

“Hello. Name’s Shane.”

“Nice to meet—”

“Okay, you finished? Quit bothering me.”

“Shane!” Gus scolded. “Be a good sport!”

“Whatever. I don’t care who he is.”
And he marched back to his corner.

Well. That killed the mood.

“Ah, don’t take it personally,” Gus said apologetically. “He’s like that with everyone.”

Emily rolled her eyes.

Just as I was about to leave, a tall man walked in.

“Hey, Clint!” Gus called. “Meet the new farmer!”

Clint blinked at me. “Oh. You’re the new farmer?”
He shifted awkwardly. “Uh… hi. I’m Clint. Blacksmith.”

“Eric,” I replied.

“Cool.”

And that was that.

“Alright, Gus. It’s getting late—I should head home.”

“Glad to meet you, Eric! Come by again. The saloon gets lively at night!”

Outside, the night air felt crisp. I hurried back to the farm to chop a bit of wood—just enough to craft a storage chest. Without a decent backpack, space was going to be a problem, and I’d heard the general store sold a larger one.

I didn’t know how much it cost, but based on everything else in this town, I suspected it wasn’t cheap.

With the stars above and the faint glow of the cottage window, I worked until my arms ached—then finally, finally, crawled into bed.

Tomorrow would be another long day. But at least it felt like my life was moving somewhere new.
 

Cuddlebug

Farmer
Book 1 – Spring, Year 1

This first installment follows Eric Keene’s arrival in Pelican Town and the psychological adjustment that comes with rebuilding a life from scratch. Spring focuses on his beginnings as the town’s newest farmer and his evolving relationships with the community.

The Saloon, Mines, and Museum feature prominently, and characters such as Emily, Shane, Penny, and others play central roles in shaping Eric’s early development.

Book 1 is complete (30+ chapters). I’ll be posting one to two chapters per week to allow space for discussion and feedback.

Constructive critique is welcome — especially on pacing, dialogue, characterization, and thematic clarity.

Prologue
Chapter 1
Thank you for sharing your novel here. Sounds familiar to me in away, but that's caused by the fanfic canon I suppose. Have red quite a bunch of that stuff at Wattpad, so the beginning is mostly the same. But I'm looking forward to the next part., so go on please. 😊
 

Gamer1234556

Greenhorn
Thank you for sharing your novel here. Sounds familiar to me in away, but that's caused by the fanfic canon I suppose. Have red quite a bunch of that stuff at Wattpad, so the beginning is mostly the same. But I'm looking forward to the next part., so go on please. 😊
Yeah, I guess that is an effect a lot of fanfics have in that they tend to start out the same. Later on though, I assure you things do get a bit more interesting.
 

Gamer1234556

Greenhorn
Chapter 2
When I woke up, I was planning to start on my parsnips when I noticed a letter on my doorstep:

Hello there,
Just got back from a fishing trip. You should come down to the beach sometime. I've got something for ya.
– Willy


Willy? Alright, guess I’m meeting a fisherman today.

I planted the parsnips and the mixed seeds I’d gathered yesterday, watered everything, and headed out. On my way to the beach, I saw a violet-clad girl hurrying toward the library. She looked deep in thought, so I didn’t interrupt.

Near the pier, I found a bearded man leaning over the water, cigar smoldering, eyes fixed on the gulls.

This had to be Willy.

“Ahoy there, son,” he said without looking up. “Heard there’s a newcomer in town. Glad to meet you at last.”

“Eric,” I introduced.

He turned to me with a sun-creased smile. “I’m still unwrappin’ myself from a month out on the salty seas. Big haul this time—sold a lot of good fish.”

“Oh, really?”

“Aye. Finally saved enough to buy me a new rod.” He gave me an assessing look, then brightened. “Here, I want you to have my old one.”

He handed me a bamboo pole like it was something precious.

“It’s important to me the art o’ fishin’ stays alive. And hey, maybe you’ll buy somethin’ from my shop once in a while.”

I laughed. “No promises, but I’ll try.”

“There’s good water here in the valley. All kinds o’ fish,” he said, before drifting off in thought. When he snapped back, he added, “Oh! Shop’s open again. I’ll buy what you catch. If it smells, it sells—my ol’ pappy used to say.”

He tossed the cigar’s stub, stretched, and headed inside.

I tried the rod out right away. Fishing was easier than I expected: in a few tries I had herring, anchovies, sardines—and some treasure bundled with them. Aquamarine, a chunk of steel, even coal. Not bad.

A bubbling spot appeared near the pier. More fish, longer ones. My backpack filled fast.

After selling everything to Willy and pocketing the gold, I walked the shoreline for forage. Clams, mussels, and a strange set of wiggling little worms in the sand. I dug them up and found… a trilobite?

At least, that’s what I thought it was.

I was about to head to the library when I ran directly into a tall man with long, rather elegant hair.

“Ah—the new farmer we’ve all heard whispers about,” he said with theatrical flair. “Your arrival has sparked many a conversation.”

I snorted. “Heh, really? I only met five people yesterday. Not sure the hype’s warranted.”

He chuckled. “I’m Elliott. I live in the cabin on the beach.”

“Eric. And uh—this thing I dug up. Trilobite? Not sure what to do with it.”

“Gunther at the library would be most delighted to see that,” Elliott said. “His work could use the excitement.”

“Oh. Thanks, Elliott.”

I headed out, but spotted a blond guy crouched in a bush, staring at the water like he was scouting a mission.

“Hey! I’m Sam,” he said brightly. “Good to meet you!”

“Eric. Uh—catch you later!”

“See ya!”


The library was mostly empty except for a cowboy-looking man surveying a barren display case with sheer despair.

“Abysmal,” he muttered. “Not a single artifact in this entire collection.”

I offered him the trilobite.

He lit up. “Remarkable! I’d love to study this—but of course, it’s yours to keep.”

“Oh, I don’t need it,” I said. “I just wanted to know what it was.”

He blinked. “In that case, I have a favor to ask. If you find more artifacts or minerals… would you consider donating? We could make some groundbreaking discoveries. And who knows—if you keep helping, I might be able to send some rewards your way.”

“Sounds fair. I’m Eric.”

“Gunther,” he said. “The government sent me to research the historical sites around the valley. The caverns used to be full of wonders, but things have dried up… for now. Perhaps once that boulder is cleared, you might find more.”

“Looking forward to it.”


On my way toward town square, a fit, confident-looking guy passed me.

“Oh hey. You’re the new guy? Cool,” he said. “Name’s Alex.”

“That was quick,” I muttered as he walked off.

Then, a gentle-faced woman approached me with a warm smile.

“Oh! You’re not quite what I imagined, but that’s okay! I’m Jodi. It’s exciting when someone new moves in—it’s a quiet town.”

“Eric,” I said. “Nice to meet you.”

Right after, another woman approached with a cheerful nod.

“Ah! You must be Eric. I’m Marnie! I run the ranch. Drop by anytime—you won’t regret it.”

She was sweet—warm, maternal. And she knew Lewis. That struck a chord. Maybe she remembered my grandfather.

I finally made it into Pierre’s shop—despite it being closed—and the man behind the counter immediately perked up.

“Ah! Mr. Eric—the new farmer!” Pierre declared. “If you need seeds, I’m your man. A little agriculture could really boost the local economy!”

I nodded politely, then eyed the backpack.
2,000 gold. I wasn’t quite halfway.

“Close, though!” Pierre said, noticing. “Keep at it!”

“Yeah, thanks.”


I stopped by the saloon again—habit forming quickly.

“Eric!” Gus called. “Take a seat.”

“You buyin’ anything tonight?” Pam asked, already tipsy.

“Saving for the backpack,” I told her.

She laughed. “Oh yes, those things. Bet you gotta toss half your stuff out, huh?”

“Pretty much.”

Gus chimed in. “Fishing’s treatin’ you well?”

“Yeah—1200 gold so far,” I said. “Sardines, anchovies, herring.”

“Ahh, the classics.” Gus nodded. “Willy sends me some of those. I cook them into meals here. You should try a dish sometime—cheap fish, big flavor.”

I glanced at Emily behind the counter.

“Emily, how’d you end up working here?”

She shrugged lightly, smiling but with a trace of tiredness. “It pays the bills. My parents are gone, and my sister… well, she doesn’t work.”

I nodded. I hadn’t met her sister yet.

Then I looked at Shane.

“Think he’s up to talking today?” I asked Gus.

He winced. “You can try.”

I approached—and instantly regretted it.

“Wha-? What do you want? Go away!” Shane snapped.

“I haven’t even introduced myself—”

“I don’t care!” he barked, standing abruptly. “Leave. Me. Alone.”

He stormed out. The whole room exhaled.

“What did I do?” I asked. “Does he hate newcomers or something?”

Gus only sighed. Emily frowned—clearly used to this.

Pam, of course, snorted, “Guy’s got the blues, kid! Hey Gus—another round!”

Just then, a shy young woman with ginger hair stepped inside.

“Oh! I think I’ve seen you before,” I said. “I’m Eric.”

She startled slightly. “O-oh. I’m Penny.”

“That’s a lovely name,” I said—right before Pam barked:

“Hey kid! That’s my daughter you’re talkin’ to!”

I nearly choked. “THAT’S your daughter?!”

Penny’s face went crimson.

“S-sorry! Didn’t mean—”

“Nah, you’re fine,” Pam waved him off. “She’s just shy. Come on sweetie, let’s go.”

“Yes, mother…” Penny sighed as she guided Pam out.

“Well,” I exhaled. “Guess that’s my cue too. See you, Gus. See you, Emily.”

They both waved—Emily with a much brighter smile than before.

The walk back to the farm felt quieter than the bustle of the town, though my mind was anything but still. I dug my hands into my pockets and counted the coins rattling inside. Fishing had treated me well today — more than 1,200 gold already, just from herring, sardines, and whatever lucky finds the pier had tossed my way. Not bad for a first proper day with a rod in my hands. I couldn’t help smiling at the thought of Willy, leaning over the water like he owned every wave and gull in the valley. He was a character — gruff and sunburned and entirely unpretentious, yet the pride in that old bamboo rod made me feel like I was holding a piece of his life in my hands.

Then there was Gunther. The museum was practically empty, yet the man’s eyes lit up like a child’s at the sight of a trilobite. There was something almost sacred in his excitement. It made me wonder what kind of treasures the valley still held, hidden under soil, water, and neglect, waiting for someone curious enough to notice them. I liked the idea that maybe I could be that person. That maybe a few small actions could mean something beyond gold.

Speaking of gold… the backpack. I hadn’t even come close to affording it yet. Every coin felt like it carried weight — not just for seeds and tools, but for efficiency, for survival, for progress. I didn’t want to squander it, but I also didn’t want to let my new start feel constrained before it even began.

And then there was Penny. Her brief appearance had been so fleeting — shy, ginger hair catching the dimming light, voice soft and careful. There was something about her, some quiet curiosity behind the nervous glance, that made me wonder who she really was. I didn’t know yet, but something told me I’d be seeing more of her soon, and that maybe she’d be someone worth listening to when the valley got noisy, or when it got lonely.

By the time I reached the farm, stars were pinpricks against a velvet sky. The cottage glowed faintly behind the overgrown yard. Tomorrow would be another long day, full of chores, new faces, and perhaps surprises I hadn’t even imagined. But for the first time in a long while, I felt like I had a place to walk to, a purpose, and maybe, just maybe, the first glimmer of home.
 
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