Woven in Fur
Farmhand
I'm writing (well really coming back to the start of a story from a while ago 
) a story where the main character is a stray that is caught by animal catchers. This is what I have so far, what do you think?
"Flashing lights, loud beeps, and sirens. That's all I heard in the darkness. When I awakened, there was a light covering an area of a large truck filled with cages, cages, and more cages. The only thing was, they were filled with animals. The dusty confinements were filled with dirty, hopeless dogs growling cats, and me. They were all like me, caught trying to scavenge for food. Suddenly, the cages lurched backward. And, after what seemed like hours, we stopped again. Two men came back and started taking the cages out and into a dark building.
) a story where the main character is a stray that is caught by animal catchers. This is what I have so far, what do you think?"Flashing lights, loud beeps, and sirens. That's all I heard in the darkness. When I awakened, there was a light covering an area of a large truck filled with cages, cages, and more cages. The only thing was, they were filled with animals. The dusty confinements were filled with dirty, hopeless dogs growling cats, and me. They were all like me, caught trying to scavenge for food. Suddenly, the cages lurched backward. And, after what seemed like hours, we stopped again. Two men came back and started taking the cages out and into a dark building.
